~The action in the apartment ended and... it was a bit strange. A pathological relationship where the guy wants to kill the girl, and she still loves him. And yes, threatening to cut up the storyboard was supposed to be a distraction, but it still sounded funny. It turned out the protagonist knows how to punch someone. And instead of trying to do something about the protagonist, our couple seemed to give up, and he wasn't any better either, standing still instead of trying to escape with the storyboards.~
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~Who the hell is Kalon that his servants are so loyal to him? Even a scumbag like the guy who tried to kill his girlfriend is willing to sacrifice himself for Kalon. Is he some kinda God of Manga of yours or something?~
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~So, we have another plot thread. We'll finally meet the previously mentioned Kaji Sensei, who will become Kalon's next target (we haven't seen the victim being protected from murder yet). The question is, why him? Many who work for Kalon also worked for him, so does he know too much? Hopefully, the daughter won't have to say goodbye to her father anytime soon, she just said goodbye to a friend from work.~
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~This was the weakest chapter so far. It's not even about the pacing, the whole plot in the apartment was just incredibly strange and at times made no sense. I think the author got so caught up in throwing the protagonist into the whirlwind of events that he didn't know how to get him out, and this is what happened. Hopefully, it's only temporary. Try harder nad better, Sensei.~