I really enjoyed my time reading this. My only major complaint is how unconclusive Utsumi's fate was, which ended up dragging along Kumagami's character resolution too.
Literally everything else about the manga is basically the best of both worlds between the TV and movie timeline, with a decent amount of dark moments and original ideas.
- BonBonVoyage3 years ago1

I agree. The payoff wasn't spectacular - but I'm not sure how it could have been resolved in a satisfactory way. Utsumi is that sort of crazy enigmatic villain who is fun to watch when he's winning, but how do you write him when he's on the backfoot? Not sure.
I have no evidence for this, but I wonder if the conclusion was rushed. Bud disappearing without any sort of farewell, Clancy doing very little in the plot overall, and you're right, Kumagami's fate seemed especially bleak. And of course, the non-Asuma/Izumi SV2 officers are neglected, although I feel like Ota is very strong in this version - it was very nice to see him get a sincerely heroic moment in the final attack on the station. I still enjoyed it a lot, and if a group ever goes through and touches up the translation, I'm definitely going to reread.
- BeatleJews3 years ago1

More than rushed ending, I think that they wanted to "fix" the TV's conclusion of the Griffon arc where Utsumi basically gets away with it without going to deep on it like they had been doing in the rest of the manga. The TV version is marginally better because it never truly tried to settle for a completely serious or completely lighthearted tone. The manga, which also featured multiple characters dying and reference to fucking child trafficking could not give itself that luxury. The way they had been building up Kumagami here almost implied that she would end up breaking her vicious cycle and cutting off from his shit from the root but nope, manga literally ran out of pages and left us only with the characters basically saying: "she's strong, she'll get over it"
Well; yeah, she will, but that should've happened a couple of pages ago. In short, I can see what they were trying to say with this but that didn't automatically make it a satisfactory ending.
As for the relevance of the rest of the SV2 team; the thing about Patlabor is that characters here are not supposed to stand out too much in a way characters from a shonen or what have you would. To me, what makes them appealing characters is their mundanity, if that makes sense. They really are just normal people with normal lives doing their job. Whatever accomplishment they pull is more out of team effort than any one character pulling all the weight contrary to what it might seem. Most of them have had their time to shine in some measure like Ota, as you said. And yeah, he was pretty great overall in the manga. Kanuka being less prominent did hurt a bit but I guess it was done so Takeo could have more time to get cozy with the SV2. As for Bud, well; there wasn't much they could do about him once the Griffon was out to be honest, but hey at least he got adopted later...
EDIT: Sorry for the long answer but I don't think I'll have many chances to discuss this manga with anyone hahah.

